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利弊类大作文，教育类话题
In recent years pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
题目来源：2017年8月19日大陆雅思大作文
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题目大意
近些年，对中小学生和大学生的压力越来越大，他们从小就被迫很努力的学习。你认为这是一个积极还是消极的发展？
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思路解析
这是一道利弊类大作文。各位已经有孩子或者将来准备有孩子的考鸭们，都会遇到这个现实问题，
月半鸭先来和大家聊聊认为积极的原因，主要有三方面。
一是学习增加知识对于孩子是有益的。在孩子小的时候，语言能力或者数学能力等开发潜力也是最大的。如果家长和学校能在这个时期做出针对性引导开发，对于孩子将来更好的掌握相关的能力是有很大助益的。
二是这对于孩子的未来是有好处的。在国内，对于绝大多数学生来说，努力学习意味着可能有更好的成绩，更好的成绩可以读更好的学校，更好的学校意味着有更好的工作机会和未来。因此，即使孩子小时候努力学习可能会失去一部分快乐或自由，但是对于未来是有益的。
三是对于社会和国家来说，越多孩子小时候努力学习，意味着长大了成为人才的概率就越高。而人才的数量和质量越高对于科技等领域的发展越有益，进而对整个社会和国家越有益。
然后我们来聊聊认为消极的原因。
月半鸭看到这道题目，第一反应想起来最新一期奇葩说。
（题外话，月半鸭强烈安利大家去看奇葩说，从没看过的同学建议从第一季开始，又好看又对雅思写作有好处！）
陈铭和颜如晶1v1辩论的主题：孩子做作业到半夜，你是否要找老师理论。
陈铭就讲了2个点：
孩子生长激素发育的最高峰期是晚上10点-凌晨1点，但是他必须在深度睡眠时才能分泌生长激素。所以孩子需要8-9点上床，10点进入深度睡眠，因为他需要长身体。成绩以后赶回来，身体发育的日子过一天少一天永远追不回来！
孩子做作业到半夜会犯困。行为主义心理学告诉我们：一个人如果老在困的时候学习，未来一学习就困，不是深夜也困。这就是条件反射。
我们回到这道写作题，总结下认为是消极的两方面原因，两方面。
一是这样可能会占用孩子休息的时间，影响孩子的发育。孩子从小被迫努力学习，意味着他可能要占用原本应该睡觉休息的时间来完成作业或者补习，进而影响孩子正常发育长身体。
二是这样可能会消磨孩子的学习热情。孩子被迫努力学习，意味着可能去学很多他不喜欢的东西，而在这个过程会降低他对于学习的积极度，进而影响他的学习效率，最后孩子耗费了时间和精力在学习上，但学习结果并不好。
最后我们来一起看下老师的范文。
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提纲
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高分范文示例
Suffering from mounting pressure, students begin to participate in a variety of tutoring classes or art classes from their childhood, as it is a must for them to work harder compared with the previous generation. Tough as it sounds, it seems to me that this is a positive development.
In spite of the fact that this may deprive children of the lightness and happiness of childhood that they could have enjoyed，it is worth mentioning that this can actually bring more happiness to a person throughout his life. For individuals, every child has a sensitive period of physical and mental development when he is young, for example, 4-year-old is the sensitive period of learning mathematics, and if parents seize this period to guide children’s interest in learning, children’s potential can be greatly developed, which is conducive to future development. In other words, for those who have been forced and trained to study hard and acquire various skills early, there would be more possibilities for them to use their knowledge and skills to do whatever they really like in their adult life and achieve success eventually. This kind of happiness, which comes from fulfilling the need of the self -actualization, is much superior than other basic needs, according to hierarchical theory of needs raised by Maslow.
Apart from the achievement of personal ambition, governments can also substantially benefit from it. In other words, if citizens can cultivate their own quality from an early age, then in the future, the government can obtain more talents with refined academic performance or skills, which may substantially contribute to the social advances since they can not only bring out more technological innovation, but also explore the suitable economic development pattern to ensure the balanced and sustainable development of the country. What should be mentioned that the stable development of a country is also closely related to the happiness of local citizens themselves, by which I mean when the the facilities and equipment are optimized and become more completed, the well-being of inhabitants themselves would be considerably enhanced.
As a young mother, for me, forcing my little daughter to study hard is not about earning outstanding wealth or reputation, but helping her explore more possibilities of her own life because of her efforts since childhood, and meanwhile the world can make some positive changes because of her existence，which seems to be the essence of human reproduction and inheritance.
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相关词汇和语法结构
Mounting 越来越多
Must 必须要做的事儿
Tough 艰难的
self -actualization 自我实现
hierarchical theory of needs 需求层次论
Maslow 马斯洛夫，需求层次论的提出者
Well-being 幸福感
Inhabitant 居民
Essence 本质
Reproduction 繁衍
Inheritance传承
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